四级作文：勤俭节约（通用6篇）
篇1：四级作文：勤俭节约
As we all know,thrift is a great tradition of the Chinese nation, but also a concrete expression of high moral standing.Along with the more and more higher of living standards,many people are no longer interested in the life of thrift.They felt that thrift is becoming a thing of the pas.just as the saying goes,Waste not, want not.In fact, the thrift is not a matter of how difficult it does not need you too much to deliberate what to do.
For one thing,in a personal way,there are many things worth saving, such as water, food, power, etc. What you waste is what others need,we will not only think what we like and what we want,but also consider about the necessary to someone.For another,as a country,it is essential that advocate the good tradition of hardworking and being frugal and consciously resist waste and extravagance.Our government is aiming to build an economical society.
At last,we need to work hard, be thrifty, and oppose waste and extravagance.Not only is it our traditional virtue,but also it can help us save resources.
篇2：四级作文：勤俭节约
Every individual faces the problem of choosing an occupation after graduating from university, which is of great importance in one’s whole life. An appropriate occupation makes a man work with vigor and zest. Besides, it is beneficial for both the individual and the country。
To make an advisable choice, a graduate should take into account at least two aspects, namely, individual’ interest and the demand of the society. Only when the two aspects are connected, can a man show his ability and talent to the best advantage. If the two factors conflict, the former, in most cases, should give way to the latter, for it is interests that stimulate one’s vigor and potentials。
篇3：大学英语四级作文技巧
一、一二三
文章的条理清楚是拿到高分的一个关键因素, 考官们必然要通过这些关键性的“标签”判定你的文章是否结构清楚, 条理自然。破解方法很简单, 只要把下面任何一组的词汇加到要点前就可以了。
1) first, second, third, last (不推荐, 原因:俗)
2) firstly, secondly, thirdly, finally (不推荐, 原因:俗)
3) the first, the second, the third, the last (不推荐, 原因:俗)
4) in the first place, in the second place, in the third place, lastly (不推荐, 原因:俗)
5) to begin with, then, furthermore, finally (强烈推荐)
6) to start with, next, in addition, finally (强烈推荐)
7) first and foremost, besides, last but not least (强烈推荐)
8) most important of all, moreover, finally
9) on one hand, on the other hand (适用于两点的情况)
10) for one thing, for another thing (适用于两点的情况)
二、主题句
国有其君, 家有其主, 文章也要有其主, 否则会给人造成“群龙无首”之感。一定要写一个主题句, 放在文章的开头 (保险型) 或者结尾, 让考官一目了然, 隐藏主体句是冒险的。例
如:To begin with, you must work hard at your lessons and be fully prepared before the exam (主题句) .Without sufficient preparation, you can hardly expect to answer all the questions correctly.
三、举实例
举例子是我们揭示一个观点最好的方式, 思维短路, 举实例;提出一个观点, 举实例;提出一个方案, 举实例。只要我们无法继续文章, 就举例子。比如下面的例子:In order to attract more customers, advertisers have adopted every possible stimulative factor in ma king ads, such as sound, light, colours, cartoon films and human performance.For instance, to advertise a certain food, advertisers will ask an actor or actress to sit at a table and devour the seemingly delicious food while they film him or her.作者在说明问题的时候, 采用了单词的并列、短语的并列和完整的例子, 引用一个个词、一个个短语, 如此表达将会使文章更出彩。
四、换言之
在写作过程中, 考生可能经常会遇到没话说的情况, 可如果不继续写字数又不够, 这时最好的方式就是换一句话, 把之前表达过的意思换一些文字再说一遍, 这样可以让文章多一些字, 也可以让阅卷老师更充分地理解你的观点, 实际就是重复重复再重复。比如下面的例子:你想要说的实际上就三个字I love you.在第一段写过了, 在第二段再写的时候你可以说:I am enthusiastic about you.That is to say, I love you.到第三段还想说一样的话, 这时候你说:I am wild about you.In other words, I have fallen in love with you.
五、长短句
写一个短小精辟的句子可以起到画龙点睛的作用。我们把短句放在段首或者段末, 也可以揭示主题:As a creature, I eat;as a man, I read.Although one action is to meet the primary need of my body and the other is to satisfy the intellectual need of mind, they are in a way quite similar.在文章第一段 (开头) 用一长一短, 且先长后短;在文章主体部分, 先用一个短句解释主要意思, 然后在阐述要点的时候采用先短后长的句群形式, 定会让主体部分更加突出。文章结尾一般用一长一短就可以了。
六、变换句式
四级作文要求考生能写出一定的长句子, 但是考生一写长句往往就会写错, 怎么办?最保险的方法就是在短句之间加上表示关系的连词。比如可以在有先后关系或并列关系的句子之间加and, 例如:I enjor music and he is fond of playing guitar如果是二者并列的, 我们就可以用一个超级句式:Not only the fur coat is soft, but it is also warm.如果是转折关系, 我们就可以加上despite that, still, however, nevertheless, in spite of, despite, notwithstanding这样的词语。比如The car was old.It was in excellent condition.我们可以改成The car was quite old, yet it was in excellent condition.有时还可以附加一些东西, 即定语从句、同位语从句或者插入语。例如The man whom you met yesterday is a friend of mine;I don’t enjoy that book you are reading.其实很简单, 同位语———要解释的东西删除后不影响整个句子的构成;定语从句———借用之前的关键词并且用其重新组成一个句子插入其中, 但是whom or that关键词必须紧跟在先行词之后。
最后总结四级作文成功的关键有如下几点:
1. Organize your thoughts before writing:brainstorm, make an outline.
下笔前整合思绪:脑力激荡, 写出纲要。
2. Write clearly.Be concise.Avoid wordiness.
写作清晰, 务必精简, 避免赘言。
3. Use good grammar and write complete sentences.
使用好的文法, 写出完整句子。
4. Write simple sentences.Avoid a fancy style.
尝试简单句, 避免花哨的句法。
5. Avoid slang、cliche and informal words.
避免俚语、陈腔滥调和非正式用字。
6. Avoid use of the first person unless necessary to specific piece.
除非必要, 避免使用第一人称:如“我/我的”。
7. Writing naturally.Read it aloud.Does it sound natural?Does it flow?
自然挥洒, 大声朗诵。整篇文章听起来自然吗?通顺吗?
8. Move logically from one idea to the next.Don’t skip steps.
上下句意要合乎逻辑。别毫无章法乱跳。
摘要：近年来, 大学英语四级考试成为大学生必须应对的主要考试之一, 新大纲对写作的要求有所提高, 考生在写作专项的失分较多。本文对大纲进行了分析, 提出了五点写作技巧, 以期提高考生的写作水平。
关键词：大学英语四级,写作,技巧
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篇4：从简单句突破新四级作文
这是从广大考生的实际出发给出的回答。因为学了很多年的英语，大部分考生还是能够写出一些东西的，最起码能够写出一些英语的简单句吧。简单句包括S+V(主谓句)，S+V+O(主谓宾)， S+V+O+O(主谓宾宾)，S+V+O+C(主谓宾宾补)， S+V+C(主系表)，复杂一些的句子无不是由这些简单句演变而来的。
·用简单句写复杂思想·
学了这么多年英语，为什么还不能写出好的句子？原因在于想得太复杂了。我们可以将要表达的汉语思想，全部说成简单的句子，而简单句，在写作时是考生可以掌控的。之后再将简单句加以润色、组合，使之登堂入室，夺取高分。
例如写这句话：大学生刚刚毕业就想立刻找到高薪的工作是不可能的。看到这样的汉语句子，一般我们的反应是要用It is impossible for sb. to do sth.. 这样的句型，然后想着往里填词：在sb. 的位置填上“刚刚毕业的大学生”，在不定式的位置填上“找到高薪的工作”，如下所示：
It is impossible for刚刚毕业的大学生to找到高薪的工作.
那么“刚刚毕业的大学生”怎么写？英语里面好像找不到一个表示“刚刚毕业的”形容词放在大学生前面，所以就要用定语从句，写成college students who have just graduated，如果graduated不会写，先写成left；然后怎么写“高薪的”，英语里面也没有这样一个形容词放在jobs的前面，所以用定语从句，写成to find jobs which can give them a lot of money。这样这个句子将写成：It is impossible for college students who have just graduated to find jobs which can give them a lot of money. 这样将两个定语从句放在这个句型里面，实在是太容易犯错了。实际上，刚刚毕业的大学生可以写成：newly-graduated students, 而高薪的工作可以写成well-paying jobs, 将这两个短语放进去，成为：It is impossible for newly-graduated students to find well-paying jobs，与上面的定语从句相比会获得更高的分数。不过试问，能写出这两个短语的有几人呢？
我们能不能换一种思路，想得简单点，把上面一句话拆分成为四句：
①每年，都有很多大学生毕业。
②他们都想找到工作。
③这些工作可以给他们很多钱。
④这是不可能的。
我相信这样的句子大部分考生很快就可以写出来：
①Every year, many college students graduate.
②They all want to find jobs.
③These jobs can give them a lot of money.
④This is impossible.
第一句话属于五种简单句中的主谓句，第二句是主谓宾，第三句是主谓间宾直宾，第四句是主系表。
下面我们看看能不能润色一下：第一句话我们将熟悉的many改为heaps and heaps of (一批一批的)，这是换词；然后给graduate这个谓语动词加一个非常简单的修饰状语：from universities；又想到还有独立的学院，再加上and institutes。第一句话变成：Every year, heaps and heaps of college students graduate from universities and institutes.
这句话这样一改，便成气候了。
第二句和第三句可以用定语从句连接起来，因为第三句的主语是第二句最后jobs的重复，所以②＋③成为：They all want to find jobs，which can give them a lot of money. 再润色，我们发现give可以改为offer，a lot of money可以改为handsome salaries。利用学过的语法知识我们可以让这个句子更加复杂，给定语从句中加一个插入语：they hope，放在which后面，这样这句话就成为：They all want to find jobs，which they hope can offer them handsome salaries.
第四句话也可以和前两句连在一起，这次不采用主从复合句，而采用并列句，因为意思发生转折，故用but连接，而impossible太绝对了，改为hardly possible，于是成为：They all want to find jobs，which they hope can offer them handsome salaries，but this is hardly possible.
所以最初的那句话，经过拆解、加工(换词和连句)形成了下面的一组句子：Every year, heaps and heaps of college students graduate from universities and institutes. They all want to find jobs，which they hope can offer them handsome salaries，but this is hardly possible.
上文总共32个词，与我们刚才认为很难达到的那个句子It is impossible for newly-graduated students to find well-paying jobs (10个词)相比，气势上毫不逊色，但是哪一种写法更适合广大考生的情况呢？当然是从熟悉的东西着手改造更为可取，像newly-graduated和well-paying这样的天外来客式的词组需要积累，或者自己有意去搜寻。再强调一下：上面这组句子是我们从简单句变过来的。这说明：简单句这只丑小鸭也可以变成白天鹅！这是对四级考生写作应试方面最大的启示！
笔者坚定地认为，写好四级作文，切勿好高骛远，一下子就想写出来很复杂的句子可能会搞得遍体鳞伤。所以，要从可以掌控的东西出发，即将复杂的汉语思想分解成为简单句，或者说，学会想简单的句子，然后表达成为简单句，进而对之进行再加工，要么换词，要么连句，如此润色，写作可成矣！
·简单句写作思路·
英文写作的思维就像一个黑洞，似乎深不可测，但如果我们将写作的过程视为一个看不见的汉译英的过程就会简单明了得多。根据笔者的经验，英文写作一般是先想主语，因为主语是一句话的开头；再想谓语，谓语中应该会先写助动词，所以先想用什么时态、语态、情态；接下来是动词，动词要考虑的是用及物动词还是不及物动词，是系动词还是实义动词。如果是及物动词就要考虑跟宾语，系动词就要考虑跟表语。如下图所示：
下面，我们一起来写几句话。
例一： 国际旅游业创造了很多就业机会。
这句话比较简单。首先想想写这句话主语应该是什么？应该是“国际旅游业”，谓语应该是“创造”，还要带一个宾语“就业机会”。这句话的主干应该是：旅游业创造就业机会。对应的简单句句型应该是主谓宾S+V+O。先写主语：International tourism；下面考虑时态，这应该是一个经常反复发生的动作，故用一般现在时，create这个动词应该加s；create是及物动词，所以后面加上many job opportunities, 写成：International tourism creates many job opportunities.
例二：外出工作让母亲们没法照顾好孩子。
这是一个稍微难的句子，先想主语，是“外出工作”，在主语的位置要用动名词，写成Working outside；“让”不能写成let，要用make, 时态用一般现在时，故make要加s；make是及物动词，后跟宾语mothers, “没法照顾好孩子”就成为宾语补足语，构成S+V+O+C的句型，宾语补足语用形容词，写成unable to take good care of their children, 全句成为：Working outside makes women unable to take good care of their children.
当然还可以写成：
Working outside makes it impossible for women to take good care of their children.
这句话将原句进行了适当变通，使之成为“外出工作让母亲们照顾好孩子成为不可能”，然后活用了it作为形式宾语，将不定式后置。相比之下第一种写法稍显生硬。
第三种写法：Working outside deprives women of the chance to take good care of their children.
这句话将原句进行了适当变通，使之成为“外出工作剥夺了母亲们照顾好孩子的机会”，活用了deprive sb. of 这个句型。所以英语写作有很多可能，可选择自己最有把握的句子写出来。
例三：五月到九月份，公司的营业额极不稳定。
这句话在图表写作时可能遇到。五月到九月份可以理解为在五月到九月份，作时间状语，写成between May and September；主语选择“公司的营业额”，将这句话理解为“是极不稳定的”；谓语动词选择系动词be的过去式，为was；“不稳定的”用形容词erratic, 这句话可以写成主系表结构S+V+C：Between May and September, the turnover of the company was fairly erratic.注意系动词所表示的“是”，经常在汉语思维中隐藏。
篇5：四级作文：勤俭节约
Apprently, the vivid picture given above portrayed that a teacher and her student are praising the convenience of remote education. When it comes to the choice between studying in traditional colleges and self-studying through Internet, recently more people choose to receive remote education.
In the eyes of those people studying through Internet, remote education has its own advantages which are beneficial to their study. In the first place, studying through Internet is more efficient and flexible because learners will not be bound up in the classroom at the required time. In the second place, they can listen to the lessons from the famous teachers who are uneasy to contact at campus.
But remote education is still far from perfection. On one hand, staying before computers too long will make students neglect the importance of communication. On the other hand, different from the traditional teaching methods, students find it more difficult to get feedback from their teachers on time.
In my opinion the remote education represents the trend of educational development and the most effective way to realize the popularity and justice of educational resource. Of course, presently it is only a complement to the traditional education.
显然，上面给出的生动画面描绘了一位老师和她的学生正在称赞远程教育的便利。在传统院校学习和网络自学之间的选择上，最近越来越多的人选择接受远程教育。
在那些通过互联网学习的人眼中，远程教育有其自身的优势，对他们的学习有利。首先，通过互联网学习更高效、更灵活，因为学习者不会在规定的时间被束缚在课堂上。其次，他们可以听听校园里难以接触的名师的.课。
但远程教育还远未完善。一方面，在电脑前呆太久，会使学生忽视交流的重要性。另一方面，与传统的教学方式不同，学生很难及时得到老师的反馈。
篇6：四级英语作文
2． 另一些认为大学里应与别人同住
3． 你的看法
Living alone or Living with Roommates
Nowadays, there has appeared a heated discussion among the college students as to whether they should live alone outside the campus or live together with other roommates in the students’ dormitory.Opinions are divided over the matter.Those who are in favor of Living alone maintain that it is very convenient to live by themselves.They can enjoy absolute freedom in a room of their own.They can have their own timetable without disturbing others.They are also free to equip the room with a personal computer so that they can have easy access to the Internet.But others argue that living with roommates has attractions of its own.With several students sharing the same room, each
person’s experiences can be greatly enriched.They can learn a lot from talking to one another.By learning to tolerate the differences between individuals, they can become more mature.As far as I’m concerned, I prefer to live with roommates because I love the feeling of belonging.Besides, it is a lot cheaper to live in a dorm than to rent a apartment outside the campus.点评：本文与校园生活密切相关，也是近年来出现的现象，人们对此的看法各异，2003年后，四级作文考查加大了学校生活类题目的考查，因为这类题材不存在地域的差异，不同地域的同学都有话可说。本预测题即为校园生活类话题，与刚考完的四级作文话题类似，符合命题者出题思路，值得引起重视。
Direction: For this part you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic :Cell Phones.You should write no less than 120 words and base your composition on the outline below:
1.描述上图所示的手机用户数的变化情况
2.出现这种情况的原因
3.对此现象作出评价
Cell Phones
As is shown in the chart, cell phones are becoming
increasingly popular within China.In 1999, the number of cell phones in use was only 2 million, but in 2002, the number reaches 5 million.And in the year 2005, the number has suddenly soared to 9 million.There are many factors contributing to this development.Firstly, a cell phone has no wires and can be carried everywhere easily.Secondly, a cell phone is something wonderful that we can have fun with news, games, music and chat through sending short messages.Thirdly, the drop in price and the simultaneous improvement in the functions have made it possible for an average person to make use of cell phone.The wide use of cell phones has make them more and more indispensable in people’s daily life.The many functions of the cell phone have made certain people reluctant to separate themselves from their cell phone.点评：随着我国经济的快速发展，人民的生活水平不断改善，通讯业的日新月异的发展，使得手机使用普及化，成为人们日常生活的必需品，对此的利弊人们看法各异。本预测题为热点话题，同样是年轻人较熟悉和经常讨论的话题，值得关注。
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic
Advertisement.You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese:
1.广告的作用
2.广告的形式多样
3.广告的夸张性
Advertisement
Advertisements are forcing their way into people’s lives.People refer to advertisements in their daily lives because they are consumers.The advertisers are usually manufacturers, retailers and salesmen.Their merchandise needs to be advertised to bring it to the attention to the customers.Thus nearly every product is advertised in some way.To a large extent, good advertising leads to success while bad advertising can mean failure.There are many ways to advertise and ‘ads’ come in different forms.Newspapers carry advertisements.Some products are publicized on TV and radio which bring them into notice of a wide audience.Billboards also carry advertising.Advertising is a big industry now and many agencies have been set up to furnish a variety of forms..However, advertising is not always truthful.A product is often misrepresented.The advertiser exaggerates the benefits of the merchandise he wants to sell.Thus, he misrepresents the truth.The consumer falls victim to such advertising.Millions of people have bought advertised products and have been dissatisfied with them。
点评：这是一篇说明文，用说明的表达方式来解说事物，阐明事理。写好说明文，不仅要抓住特征，注意条理，而且要巧妙运用说明方法，像下定义、举例子、作比较、分类别、列数字、打比方等
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic: A Letter to the President of the University about Improving the Sports Facilities on Campus.You should write no more than 120 words, and base your composition on the outline given below in Chinese:
假设你是李明，请你写一封信给校长，建议改善本校体育设施状况，内容应涉及体育设施对大学生的重要性，对目前学校体育设施的状况可以表扬，可以提出批评建议，也可以兼而有之。
A Letter to the President of the University Dear Mr.President, I am writing this letter to you to express my concern about the sports facilities on campus.I have noticed that our university has very limited resources in terms of opportunities to participate in sports, especially given that the number of students on campus is increasing every year.As we both know, sports are very important for the sound growth of young people.If they have access to quality sports facilities, young people are able to choose a healthier lifestyle, to boost self-esteem and confidence, and to build a positive outlook and sense of achievement.My proposal is to build a new sports area.It should be designed with soccer players, basketball players, and ping-pong players in mind.It should have a different section for each activity and be available to students all year round.I believe such facilities will meet our sporting needs.Thank you for your reading this letter.Yours faithfully, Li Ming
点评：本预测题仿真度颇高，为校园生活话题，与在校大学生日常生活密切相关，是最近几年侧重考查的题材。2002年1月考查了就本校食堂状况给校长写一封信.Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic On a Harmonious Dormitory Life.You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese:
1.宿舍生活有时会出现不和谐的情况;
2.一个和谐宿舍生活的必要性;
3.如何创造和谐的宿舍生活。
On a Harmonious Dormitory Life
Dormitory life is an indispensable part of college life.But sometimes the harmony in the dormitory be disturbed in one way or another.As is known to all, a harmonious dormitory life is important to college students and benefits all the members.On one hand, we can have a good rest and put our heart into study.On the other hand, we will have a good mood and enjoy being together.There are several ways to create and maintain a harmonious dormitory life.Firstly, you have to evaluate your life-style and try to get rid of your dirty habits, if there are any.Secondly, when an annoying situation arises, you’ll just have to learn to tolerate each other and co-exist.Thirdly, you’ll have to share with each other and make good friends.In conclusion, we should try our best to build a harmonious dormitory life for
the sake of good study and good life.点评：“和谐”成为我们当今社会词频概率最高用词，就社会而言，倡导建立和谐社会；就家庭而言，提倡建设和谐家庭；就校园来讲，则要建立和谐校园；和谐两字似乎无所不在，大学生宿舍生活同样需要和谐。本预测题与四级考试热点密切相关，又为典型的校园生活主题，值得关注。
假设你是一名学生志愿者，要给来你们学校参观的外国朋友介绍学校情况。内容应包括学校历史、规模、教学现状以及未来目标等。
A Brief Introduction to the University
Distinguished guests，Welcome to our university.Before you start to look around, allow me to give you a brief account of the school.Founded in 1927, our university is one of this city’s earliest universities of liberal arts.It is staffed with an excellent faculty, and has a total enrollment of over 10,000 students.In the past years, it has turned out numerous well-qualified students and found its graduates active in professions of all walks of life.Since its establishment, the university has always steered itself toward the objective that its students have an overall healthy development.Not only does it provide the students with basic academic courses, but it manages to expose them to the up-to-date knowledge.Besides, students are free to participate in colorful campus activities and social practice, which are intended for broadening their mind and developing their potential talent.Currently, both our faculty and students are making every effort to improve the quality of our education in the direction of a first-rate university.Thank you.点评：近几年，随着我国顺利加入世贸组织以及经济全球化步伐的加快，许多国内高校纷纷与国外大学合作办学，教育走向国际化成为人们关注的热点，也是大学生门比较关心的热点问题。本预测题为热议校园生活话题，与2004年旅游景点介绍2006年考查的名校校园开放如出一辙。
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a letter to a friend who will come to your city to see you.You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese:
假设你是李明, 你的一个朋友张伟准备到你所在的城市来旅游，但你有事不能接待。写封信给他，解释你不能接待的原因，并说明你所做的安排。
A Letter to a Friend
Dear Zhang Wei，I’m glad to know that you are coming to my city during the summer vacation.However, I’m afraid there’s some bad news.I’m planning to take part in an international conference to be held in another city during the time of your visit.All the top scientists in my field will show up at the conference.More importantly, I’m lucky enough to have been selected to give a speech on behalf of my research team at the Conference.I really can’t miss it.I understand that it’ll be your first time to this city and I’m your only friend here.I’ve asked my roommate to meet you at the airport, and you can stay in my room.He is a very nice person and he will show you around the city.Hope you two will get on well and have a nice holiday!