英语六级作文高分版计算机和人ComputerandMan

英语六级作文高分版计算机和人ComputerandMan（共4篇）

篇1：英语六级作文高分版计算机和人ComputerandMan

上海新东方 靳萌

题目：

a letter declining a job offer

1. 对公司提供职位表示感

2解释为何不能接受提供的职位

3希望谅解，并表示对公司的良祝愿

Dear Sir or Madam,

I have received the letter from your corporation offering me the opportunity to work as an assistant manager. Thank you very much for your kind offer of this precious opportunity!

However, I have to say sorry for not being able to accept your offer. Shortly after applying for this position in your corporation, I received the admission letter from UCLA and was told this world-famous university would like to accept me as a graduate student in their Business School. After serious consideration, I have finally made the decision to go to the US first for my postgraduate study, which will absolutely promote my future career development .

So I would like to apologize that I have to decline your kind offer, but I believe that after my graduation, if I’m still lucky enough to get such great chance to work for you, I will definitely be a more capable team player in your corporation.

Finally, I love to offer my undying gratitude for all the efforts you have made in processing my application, and your kind understanding is highly appreciated.

Wish you a Happy New Year and wish your corporation even greater success in 2006!

With my best regards,

Jane

六级作文参考范文(11分版)

上海新东方 吴泽杨

下面，以05年12月六级作文为例，我们选用一篇11分段的.现场文章，分析其特点。首先要指出的是，选用11分段的现场例文是因为，对大多数考生来说，这个目标更现实一些。

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am pleased with your offer of the position as a salesman. Thank you very much for your appreciation and kindness.

Unfortunately, I have to say sorry for this opportunity. Several reasons may account for my decision. Firstly, your company is far away from my home, which means that the cost for my traffic is likely to be greater than what I expected. Besides, as an experienced salesman, I wish very m

篇2：英语六级作文高分版计算机和人ComputerandMan

首先，要注意一些常见词汇的替换形式。

举个例子，比如说大家在写“很多人认为”时，很多同学会写many people think，像这样一句话很明显就不容易得高分。你应该多考虑一些如：稍微好一些的主语从句：it is widely believed that(人们普遍认为);又比如说many hold the idea that(很多人都有这样的观点)等等。像这样一些简单的词汇和短语之间的这样一种切换是非常重要而且容易提分的。

又比如说在词汇方面，很多人喜欢用important、many、more and more，这都是比较老的梗了，尤其是“越来越重要”more and more important，如果这些词汇不断的重复出现，你的作文可能是得不了高分的。我们就拿more and more important举例。记住，more and more今后我们尽量变成副词的形式，叫increasingly。比如说“更加重要”-increasingly important，或者是increasingly vital or increasingly crucial等等，都会比较不错。所以你得有一个庞大的同义替换库，有些单词可能改变之后感觉更好。

其次，每周坚持“一篇两遍”

距离考试还有一个月时间，从现在开始大家必须要开始写作文了，一篇两遍是什么含义呢?首先文章一定是过去真题当中考过的文章，模拟题当中的文章可以在真题的文章全写熟练之后再去写，但是模拟题的文章它的精度和准确度和真题相比会稍稍的有一些差距，所以建议同学们从现在开始每周以历年真题为题一篇文章写两遍。

为什么要写两遍呢?要知道任何文章只写一遍没有任何的效果。第一遍计时完成，第二遍怎么办?你有很多的方式，可以把文章给你的同学、室友看看，他们在看时，很可能会有一些负面的能量产生，比如看不懂，看不下去，很奇怪等等，你需要让他们坦诚地告诉你这些观点，你再进行修正;更加靠谱的方式则是去找一些英文水平比你高的师哥师姐，把文章给他们看，在提出一些可行性意见之后，你按照这样一些可行性意见重新地对这篇文章进行二度创作和修改。一篇文章写一遍不做任何的修改是永远没有提高的，如果能写三遍，甚至写到五遍，我们相信一遍一定会比前一遍更好一些。

篇3：让英语六级作文拿高分的有？

解决问题型作文，要求考生根据考试题目中所反映或提到的问题，提出解决问题的方案或应对措施。此类作文重在考查学生解决问题的能力，因此写作时一定要具体详细地说明解决问题的方法。

1. 写作提纲

(1)阐述问题

(2)描述原因

(3)给出解决途径

2. 可参考的历年真题

12月 How to Improve Students’ Mental Health?

3. 模拟演练

How to Prevent Drink Driving From Happening?

(1)酒后驾驶已经成为危害公共安全的重要因素

(2)如何最大限度地防止此类问题的发生

(3)我的观点

题目解析：

本文对于酒后驾驶这一社会热点问题进行了探讨，主要讨论如何防止此类问题的发生，是一篇需要提出解决方案的论说文，写作时应围绕提纲进行构思：① 第一段提出酒后驾驶现象及其危害，第二段提出自己的解决方案，第三段总结自己的想法。②写作时应当注意措辞准确、结构条理、正确使用衔接句。

How to Prevent Drink Driving From Happening?

Recently, there have been tremendous reports on accidents caused by drink driving and controversial sentences of criminals. ①The miserable tragedies have demonstrated that drink driving has become a serious problem harmful to the public security. ②Therefore，something must be done to prevent such things from happening.

③First of all，corresponding laws and regulations should be made to clarify the definition and penalties of drink driving，so that the fear of punishment may pull drivers away from alcohol. Secondly, the administrations and media should actively promote the modification of so-called④“wine culture”to avoid compelled drinking，in order that the drivers may say“no”to the toast proposals. Last but not least，the inspections and monitors of the government and the society should be reinforced to immediately identify drunk drivers and prevent drivers from drinking.

In conclusion，it is the responsibility of everybody to reduce drink driving to the minimum.⑤ Only when the problem is efficiently controlled can we live more safely and comfortably.

分析

① demonstrate常用于阐明现象，引出主旨。

② 提出观点，something must be done也可以用we should take measures代替。

③ 提出建议。corresponding laws and regulations, pull...away from均适用于解决问题类作文。用alcohol指代饮酒以避免重复。

④ wine culture“酒文化”，有中国特色的固定表达。

⑤ Only位于句首时主句采用部分倒装语序，注意从句采用正常语序。

解释现象型

解释现象型作文一般要求考生根据考试提纲引出某种现象，然后分析现象产生的原因，阐述其影响，并给出合理的建议。此类作文在历年真题中所占比例较大，是练习的重点之一。

1. 写作提纲

(1)描述现象

(2)阐述现象产生的原因，给出支持者或反对者的观点

(3)提出建议或总结观点

2. 可参考历年考题

12月 My View on University Ranking

12月 Should Parents Send Their Kids to Art Classes?

206月 Will E-books Replace Traditional Books?

12月 The Digital Age

3. 模拟演练

The Influence of Computer on the Movie Industry

(1)电脑和互联网给电影产业带来多种影响

(2)阐释各种影响及原因

(3)我的看法

题目解析：

这是一个解释现象型的题目，探讨了电脑和互联网对于电影产业的影响，写作时应当围绕提纲进行构思：①第一段简要说明这一现象，第二段阐释各种影响及其原因，第三段提出自己的看法。②写作时注意语言做到准确流畅，可以适当应用复合句，使文章衔接更加自然。

The Influence of Computer on the Movie Industry

The movie industry is quite different from what it was before. It has become①even more so with the aid of computers. Computers and the Internet have made many influences on the movie industry.②These, however，come down to the following aspects.

First，the development of computer graphics has enabled the movies to have more terrific③visual effects. The digital technology can create vivid images④out of thin air. And the 3D picture is another breakthrough of visual enjoyment. Second，the development of personal computers and the Internet has made it easier to download piratical movies，thus the box office of movies will be impacted. However，it can also help promote movies by the wide spread of film reviews and comments.

In my opinion，the further development of computer and the Internet may make more changes to the movie industry. There may be more technologies to bring us⑤multi-dimensional enjoyments. Maybe one day we can have totally immersive impressions of movies with the help of computer.

分析

① even more so用于强调当前的情况更加严重，可以用于提出话题。

② come down to表示“归结为”。

③ visual effects意为“视觉效果”，是高分表达。

④ out of thin air表示“无中生有”，属于固定搭配。

篇4：12月英语四六级作文高分句型

彻底改变对不可再生资源的非理性滥用是绝对有必要的。例如，必须开发节能的机动车减少汽油的消耗量，并且必须找到可替代能源取代煤。

2. While achieving success is easier said than done , persistence does in fact pay off . One of the most important traits of a successful person is self-confidence , another is desire , and still another is determination .

获得成功说起来比做起来容易，然而坚持不懈确实会有好结果。成功人士的最重要的特征之一是自信，第二是渴望，还有一个是决心。

3. Recognizing a problem is the first step in finding a solution .

认识到问题是找到解决办法的第一步。

4. Many of the explanations offered thus far are at least to a certain extent valid , but none fully address the problem and the issue must be examined in a wider context .